Ali Akbar Noresideh; Masoud Salmani Haghighi
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Analysis and investigation of translation quality have long been taken into consideration. Various methods have been proposed by theorists and linguists to critique the translation of texts from Arabic into Persian and vice versa. One of the methods presented in the field of translation criticism is ...
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Analysis and investigation of translation quality have long been taken into consideration. Various methods have been proposed by theorists and linguists to critique the translation of texts from Arabic into Persian and vice versa. One of the methods presented in the field of translation criticism is Vinay and Darbelnet’s model. This article raises two questions: How is the translation of Adel Abdel Moneim Suleim evaluated based on the Vinay and Darbelnet model, and which of the components of Vinay and Darbelnet is most used in the translation? In this research, using a descriptive-analytical method, a part of Adel Abdel Moneim Suleim's Arabic translation of Jalal Al-Ahmad's School Principal novel is examined based on the Vinay and Darbelnet model, and the quality and method of interpretation of this novel are evaluated by the translator. The result shows that the translator paid more attention to the elements of the target language in translating the selected samples. Also, in some cases, the translator ignores the transmission of the message and content of the original language to the target language and relies on direct and lexical translation, which may be due to the translator's insufficient knowledge of some cultural components and the basic foundations of the source language.
Aliakbar Noreside; Masood Salmani Haghighi
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Coherence is a semantic concept that refers to semantic relations in the text and distinguishes it as a text from non-text. Cohesion potentially lies in the language system tools, such as referral, removal, succession, etc., within the language itself. Given the necessity of the principle of equilibrium ...
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Coherence is a semantic concept that refers to semantic relations in the text and distinguishes it as a text from non-text. Cohesion potentially lies in the language system tools, such as referral, removal, succession, etc., within the language itself. Given the necessity of the principle of equilibrium and equality in the translation process, the reflection of each of the above factors in translating is important in the direction of moving in line with the original text. Since Sahifeh Sajjadieh, as a coherent text, includes various types of coherence, it is expected that the translations made will reflect these elements of coherence. This paper uses a descriptive-analytical approach to study and adapt the components of non-structural grammatical coherence in the text of the Twelve Sufi Sajjadiyah prayers and four translations. From this study, the degree of adherence of the translators to the reflection of these components of the coherence section was examined. Finally, the result of this study was that among the massive components of some translators, in the shadow of the movement, the equivalents and equal to the original text, and the selection of appropriate equivalents, the original has been fully reflected in its translations, in some cases the translators have overlooked this principle, which can be attributed to factors such as the particular style of the translator and the grammatical capacity of the target text.
