Aliakbar Noreside; Masood Salmani Haghighi
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Coherence is a semantic concept that refers to semantic relations in the text and distinguishes it as a text from non-text. Cohesion potentially lies in the language system tools, such as referral, removal, succession, etc., within the language itself. Given the necessity of the principle of equilibrium ...
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Coherence is a semantic concept that refers to semantic relations in the text and distinguishes it as a text from non-text. Cohesion potentially lies in the language system tools, such as referral, removal, succession, etc., within the language itself. Given the necessity of the principle of equilibrium and equality in the translation process, the reflection of each of the above factors in translating is important in the direction of moving in line with the original text. Since Sahifeh Sajjadieh, as a coherent text, includes various types of coherence, it is expected that the translations made will reflect these elements of coherence. This paper uses a descriptive-analytical approach to study and adapt the components of non-structural grammatical coherence in the text of the Twelve Sufi Sajjadiyah prayers and four translations. From this study, the degree of adherence of the translators to the reflection of these components of the coherence section was examined. Finally, the result of this study was that among the massive components of some translators, in the shadow of the movement, the equivalents and equal to the original text, and the selection of appropriate equivalents, the original has been fully reflected in its translations, in some cases the translators have overlooked this principle, which can be attributed to factors such as the particular style of the translator and the grammatical capacity of the target text.
mohamad farhadei; Mahmood Mirza al-Hosseini; Ali Nazari
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Translation has long been considered as a way to become familiar with the customs and culture of other nations and has always had two origin-oriented and target-oriented approaches, and these two approaches each have their own advocates. Antoine Burman is one of the origin-oriented theorists of translation ...
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Translation has long been considered as a way to become familiar with the customs and culture of other nations and has always had two origin-oriented and target-oriented approaches, and these two approaches each have their own advocates. Antoine Burman is one of the origin-oriented theorists of translation science, who, in his theory of "disruptive tendencies," lists thirteen cases that cause distortion in translation including “verbosity” and “explanation.” This paper intends to critique the two cases in the Persian translation of Ansariyan from Sahifeh Sajjadiyah using the descriptive-analytical method to determine the extent of the deviations in his translation based on the theory mentioned above. Hence, first, referring to Berman''s theory, this paper proceeds to criticize and investigate the issues mentioned above and, in cases where it is required provides a suggested translation.The findings of this study indicate that the verbosity in the translation of Ansarian is presented in five general categories.: respect, collocation, Arabic and Persian synonyms, non-Arabic and Persian synonyms, and other verbosities; and explanation is presented in three axes of intertextual with the Qur''an, the mention of blessings, and other explanations that most of these disrupt the textual music and its hidden briefness.
